David woke up to the sound of the continuous faint beeps of some machine kept somewhere close to his ears. When he slowly opened his eyes, he didn’t quite recognize his surroundings and it took him more than a few moments to realize that he was in a hospital. The beeps were coming from a machine which was supposedly monitoring his pulse and heartbeat evidenced by the sensors connected to the machine from his chest and the small clip-like device on his left index finger. Feeling his face, he noticed that he had a couple of bandages on his left forearm and his head was also bandaged with an injury on the left side of his forehead.
Once he got over his initial grogginess, he looked around and noticed the other guy in the room. He had propped up a second chair to put his legs up and was dozing away. When David cleared his throat, the other guy opened his eyes and looked at him. On seeing David awake, the guy broke into a big smile.
“Hey dude, welcome back!” he said, getting out of the chair and coming up to David’s bed. “You had us worried for quite a while bro.”
David didn’t quite know how to react. For whatever reason, he simply couldn’t recognize the other person at all. Although he felt some degree of familiarity with him, David couldn’t quite place the other person or figure out why exactly he felt so familiar.
When David didn’t register any emotion or say anything, the other guy asked him “Hey David, dude, are you ok man? How do you feel now?” and when he didn’t get any answer, the other guy pressed the switch to call the duty nurse into the room. And when the nurse came in, the other guy went up to her and asked her to inform the doctor that David had regained his consciousness.
After five odd minutes, the doctor walked into the room, all the while smiling at David. “So David, you had us all worried for quite a while now. How do you feel now? Does your head still hurt?” he asked. David mumbled “I feel fine, kind of…”
“Where am I? What happened to me?” he asked.
“You were involved in an accident around 36 hrs ago. You were brought in by the policemen, who managed to call your friend Ram here based on the last dialed number from your mobile” the doctor replied.
David looked a little perplexed “Accident! But I don’t remember any of this.”
“That’s ok, you just need to relax, take some rest. Just lie down and try to get some sleep” the doctor put his hand on David’s shoulder and told him.
He then took Ram outside the room. “It looks like your friend might have had more serious internal injuries than we initially suspected. Let us run a series of tests to verify the same, but my initial suspicion is that he has experienced some form of memory loss.”
“That is why he reacted the way he did. It was almost like he didn’t recognize me!” Ram exclaimed. Given that David had been his room-mate for almost three years now and they were quite close friends, Ram had been disturbed by his reactions over the last ten odd minutes since he had regained consciousness.
“Don’t worry Ram, these kinds of things are quite common in accidents involving head injuries. Let’s not jump to any conclusions yet. Let’s run the tests first and then we will be in a better position to figure out what is happening to David. Ok.”
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This post has been written for the Write Tribe Festival of Words 2 where today’s prompt had to be about memories.
This is the first post in a novella “The Confession” that I am writing trying to correlate the same to the Write Tribe Festival of Words 2.
I hope this was a fictional memory. If not, I hope David regained his memory. In some strange way, your post answered a question I sent to the Universe. Thank you.
Thanks for commenting on my post.
@Suzy, this is the first posts of a series of seven part story that I am writing for the Write Tribe Festival of Words…and am glad it managed to answer a question for you 🙂
I shall look forward to the rest of the story.
All the best for the festival of words. A great start to your story. Fingers crossed for David. 🙂
@preethiprasan, thank you, enjoy the rest of the series as well 🙂
WOW! Another awesome short story from you! Loving the characters so far. Would love to know what this is leading to. 🙂
@Jyothi, am sure you will enjoy the rest of the series as well
Jairam, this is a nice story. You started with a bang, different from others.Curious to know how how the story will proceed.
@menons129, yes, the beginning is always the hook, right 🙂
a great story to start the festival 🙂 Nice post!!
@Novemberschild, thank you, am hoping that you will enjoy the rest of the series 🙂
Now why didn’t I have the idea of writing a series hmpf.
Anyways it will be a fiction a day on my part too.
Awaiting the next part
@Bhagyashree, this is just an experiment from my side, hope it turns out decent in the end 🙂
That’s not fair… to stop your story that way! Anyways, that’s an awesome way to get started. Looking forward to the next 6 stories from you 🙂
@Shalini, no, this was not the end of the story, this was just the end of Chapter 1 of the story, the next 6+ posts are continuation of the same story 🙂
Waiting for the next in the series. Great take Jairam.
@Geeta, thank you 🙂
Amazing start… looking forward to more…
@privytrifles, thank you so much 🙂
Wow on Day One for this beautifully scripted story. You had me coz I thought that it was a super power who saved him, the dude speaking to him when he woke up:)
@Vishal, no superpowers or superheroes in this story 🙂
A great beginning. Looking forward to the next part!
@Shilpa, thank you, am hoping you will like the rest of the series as well 🙂
My …my…my……! What do you know? I hadn’t checked out anyone’s entries before I started writing my post today. And look at what’s happened. We’re both writing novellas 🙂 You know what they say about great minds …! On a separate note – Outstanding stuff man. Looking forward to tomorrow and the rest of the parts which I’m sure will culminate together to form an exceptional novella!!!
@Sid, i don’t know about “exceptional”, am just hoping it turns out to be decent and engaging enough for the readers, that’s all 🙂
This is the first part and I am waiting to read the six parts. Hope David recovers his memory.
@Kalpana, the entire series is about David and his lost memory only 🙂
Great start… only thing i hate about novellas is the waiting part…. 😉
@Sheethal, same here, I read and comment on entire novellas only after I read the whole thing in one stretch 🙂
How scary it must be for someone to wake up in a hospital bed without any memory! I know this is fictional – but it could all be so true.
I see the start of another fascinating tale here, Jairam. How you turn these out so consistently is something I marvel at. Looking forward to more!
@Corinne, yes, the complete absence of any thoughts from the past is interesting, isn’t it. Here’s hoping you enjoy the rest of the posts and the complete novella itself 🙂
This seems like fun. Looking forward to the story. Hurry up.
@obsessivemom, it is one post a day, so you have to wait, no other options unfortunately 🙂
Oooo quite intriguing…can’t wait to find out what next!!
@Aditi, 🙂
Waiting for the other posts after reading this Jairam. All the best 🙂
@Sunita, thank you, hope you like the rest of the series as well 🙂
How scary to wake up and just not know! You portrayed the anxiety and confusion felt by the patient so well. Your story was captivating. Simpy brilliant!
@Kathy, thank you so much
So ‘memories’ to you mean ‘loss of memories’. Interesting take. Let’s see what comes tomorrow … 🙂
@Sakshi, ‘memories’ mean a lot of things to me, it’s just that I took this opportunity to interpret this as ‘loss of memories’ that’s all. BTW, this is the first post in a novella which I intend to complete using the Write Tribe Festival 🙂
That’s scary. For both David and Ram! Hope things work out well and soon. I can’t wait for tomorrow’s entry.
@Bhavya, the novella is about how things work out for David
oh dear!! how sad and horrifying to wake up with one’s memory wiped out!! I hope David remembers everything!
@pixie, you will have to wait and read the rest of the series to find out
A great beginning jam. Waiting for the next part.
@Paddy, thank you 🙂
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Oh you have my curiosity awakened! This could be full blown story of espionage or a charming story of a close friends fight back to their life after a terrible accident. I’m going to follow along. #Writetribe
Ah so David had a memory loss almost like it happens in the movies. Memories are precious! What would we be without them. I have already read the second part. Let us see how it progresses.
@Rachna, yes, without our memories, we are almost next to nothing, aren’t we?
Ahh Jairam! Curious I am to read the remaining set of posts after this wonderful take on memory. It sure is gonna be a lovely story fully packed with all the necessary emotions and drama. Off to read the second post. 🙂
@Rekha, not too much drama, but emotions, yes, quite a good does of them, am hoping you will enjoy the series 🙂
Is this going to be a seven day story? If so am loving it already. It was a wonderful take on the prompt.
@Sugandha, actually it is going to be a 8 day or maybe even a 9 day story 🙂 Glad you liked the first part
Great story – look forward to the other parts. 🙂
You can check mine here – http://dreamzandclouds.wordpress.com/2013/12/09/memories/
@dreamzandclouds, glad you liked the first part 🙂
The apathy of David towards Ram to being perplexed of not knowing him is beautiful…. 🙂
@Aditya, wow, you managed to notice that small nuance, did you 🙂
The first episode took off very well…looking forward to the series…..Happy Writing
@shelly, the second post has been up since early today morning 🙂
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nice beginning… looking forward to seeing which direction it goes to.
@Doc, have put up three chapters so far, glad you liked the first one 🙂
that was a great start….scary to end up like that…with no memory at all!!! waiting to see how it goes forward!
@the little princess, enjoy the rest of the series as well 🙂
Ohhh another novella besids Sid. Well let’s see how this turns out to be 🙂 So far you have me hooked!
Richa
@Richa, enjoy the rest of the novella 🙂
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Intriguing start to the story.. good thing I am reading this now; I can read all the parts in a stretch.. 😀 Off to read the second part now..